Informative Vs. Persuasive

-My persuasive speech was much clearer
-My persuasive speech had better eye contact
-i still need better eye contact and not look down at my cards so much
-my persuasive speech had a good introduction with a hook, unlike my informative speech
-my persuasive speech had a good conclusion that summed up the speech, which i didn't do in my informative speech

How To Speech Review

My how to speech was my best speech so far. I did a much better job at looking around the room, and covering all of the areas. I needed to have more length for my speech, including better step by step directions. Also, i needed more overall information on frisbbe golf, instead of just having basic information. I missed a couple things in my speech, but overall it was good, and better than my other speechs, so far.